Wednesday, April 8, 2009

Poem #2

Walt Whitman Leaves of Grass. 1900.


GIVE me the splendid silent sun, with all his beams full-dazzling;

Give me juicy autumnal fruit, ripe and red from the orchard;

Give me a field where the unmow’d grass grows;

Give me an arbor, give me the trellis’d grape;

Give me fresh corn and wheat—give me serene-moving animals, teaching content;
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Give me nights perfectly quiet, as on high plateaus west of the Mississippi, and I looking up at the stars;

Give me odorous at sunrise a garden of beautiful flowers, where I can walk undisturb’d;

Give me for marriage a sweet-breath’d woman, of whom I should never tire;

Give me a perfect child—give me, away, aside from the noise of the world, a rural, domestic life;

Give me to warble spontaneous songs, reliev’d, recluse by myself, for my own ears only;
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Give me solitude—give me Nature—give me again, O Nature, your primal sanities!

—These, demanding to have them, (tired with ceaseless excitement, and rack’d by the war-strife;)

These to procure, incessantly asking, rising in cries from my heart,

While yet incessantly asking, still I adhere to my city;

Day upon day, and year upon year, O city, walking your streets,
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Where you hold me enchain’d a certain time, refusing to give me up;

Yet giving to make me glutted, enrich’d of soul—you give me forever faces;

(O I see what I sought to escape, confronting, reversing my cries;

I see my own soul trampling down what it ask’d for.)

49 comments:

  1. I liked this poem because it shows the things that are included with nature and it shows some imagery about what the life is like. It also explains about a perfect family and talks about over all life of the city and a nature side life. It talks about lie with nature against life and the city and shows that having contact with nature is better than being in the city. In the poem it has imagery and it is showing what a farm would look like.

    - Brigitte Bartocha

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  2. This is an amazing poem. It moved me. This peice of art enlargened my heart. If Chuck Norris were to write a poem, this would be it. Well, apparently not because this isn't Chuck Norris but...you get the point. This poem is about nature and it's beauties. I love you.

    Jake Champagne.

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  3. I like this poem because he brings so many things into. he keeps saying give me over and over and over, naming things that he wants. Only things that he needs to live. Nothing more. A simile is "Give me nights perfectly quiet, as on high plateaus west of the Mississippi, and I looking up at the stars"
    -Holly Lawson

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  4. i truthfullly don't care much for these poems. i don't like the message they are trying to give, i also dont like the way these poems flow, they arent calming or gentle, there just their . i just don't like these poems.


    in this poem there was alliteration (the splendid silent sun)

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  5. I think this poem reminds me of summer and fun. I enjoyed this poem because it moved me in a way i could never think.

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  6. I think this poem reminds me of summer and fun. I enjoyed this poem because it moved me in a way i could never think. Simile "Give me nights perfectly quiet, as on high plateaus west of the Mississippi, and I looking up at the stars."

    -Austin Linehan

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  7. This poem from the narrators point of veiw is that he want to have a perfect life. A rural and happily domestic life as said. "Give me a perfect child—give me, away, aside from the noise of the world, a rural, domestic life;" This poem is free verse and is free of rhyme scheme.
    -Devin Jamie Phillion <3333333

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  8. I liked this poem the most out of the three because it describes each season well and explains nature so wonderful (:

    I agreed with Samantha Ferguson because we both had almost the same views on the poem and we both liked the poem too.

    -Bianca Rantala

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  9. This poem remindes me of nature. The poem shows that the character wants many things in life and is kind of greedy.

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  10. I somewhat agree with Bianca Rantalla. The poem does explain the seasons and nature but it is not the main theme of the poem.
    - Devin Phillion <3

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  11. The poetic device the poem included was personification because it used human-like qualities when a line said, "Splendid Silent Sun"

    -Bianca Rantala

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  12. I like this poem because is tell you everything nature and it show somes of imagery about life. This poeam is also reminds me of summer and fun, in this poem is saying alot of stuff that we want. Is show the nature of the city, family, outide of the road,and the farm.
    A simile - "Give me nights perfectly quiet, as on high plateaus west of the Mississippi, and I looking up at the stars"

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  13. I really like this poem. It remindes me of fall time. And Walt Whitman wrote a lot about nature in the poem. Like when he said "Give me a field where the unmow’d grass grows" you can accually see the feild with the over grown grass. There is a lot of imagry in the poem, which is most of the reason why i particularly like this poem.

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  14. i like this poem. It reminds me of each season because it descrbies the things that grow & have into it. The poet explains the beauty of each, on what he wants but in a good way.

    -Samantha Cruz

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  15. I liked this poem. I love the way that is actually expains wonderful nature. The poem talks about the quiet nights, as well as the city nights. This poem uses personification, "splendid SILENT SUN."


    -Samantha Ferguson:)

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  16. this peom is very moving becuase of its descriptions and becasue of its wording. the wording was very good.it also had alot of very fgood imagery.

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  17. I liked this poem alot. I like how it explains the nature. It shows the quite part of nature as well as in the city. It shows personification when it's saying "splendid SILENT SUN". I also like the comparission it uses to actually compare the nature.


    I myself agree with Brigitte Bartocha, she viewed the poem the same way as i did. She explained the message of the poem very well.


    -Samantha Ferguson

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  18. I think that this poem is talking about the ways of life and how it describes the nature and the bueaty of it. ALso it talks about love, the ways of marriage. There is some personification in this poem like how it says. "Where you hold me enchain’d a certain time, refusing to give me up." That is how he is describing that he can ot live in the city that he has been living in for so long.

    CJ

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  19. I liked this poem because it tells alot of things about nature and life. Its says things like Give me odorous at sunrise a garden of beautiful flowers. An example of a poetic device is personification. In the poem it says the splendid silent sun. Its personification because a sun doesnt talk.

    I agree with nichole demarco because we both have most of the same views on this poem.
    - Erin Gallagher

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  20. Dieses Gedicht ist von jemand will Frühjahr kommen sie hat Personifizierung

    I agree with cjs response



    Nick Darrigo

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  21. this poem was great. i believe this was about spring and nature. it shows many good ideas about spring.

    I agree with Jake because the poem was moving.

    - Conor

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  22. This poem is describing all the good things in life, such as nature, and love. It reminds me of summer, when it talks about like grass and sun and wheat. I like this poem. It had a lot of imagery.
    "I see my own soul trampling down what it ask’d for." That is a personification because a soul cannot ask for anything.
    i agree with CJ because i also think the poem is talking about the beauty in nature.

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  23. This poem was great. I belive this poem is about nature and spring. It shows positive ideas and thoughts. Which this poem an awesome poem.

    I agree with Jake because the poem moved me as well as others.

    -Matt Febles

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  24. I enjoyed reading this poem. The theme of this poem is describing all the beauties that are found within nature. Walt Whitman used many poetic devices such as alliteration. "GIVE me the splendid silent sun".


    I agree with Samantha Smith because our theme was the same.

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  25. The theme of this poem is based on the beauty of nature.Walt Whitman explains them throughly by using many different adjectives, making it interesting.One peotry device in this poem is imagery.The poem is filled with so much detail making it possible to imagine what he is saying. He says
    "GIVE me the splendid silent sun, with all his beams full-dazzling"

    "GIVE me juicy autumnal fruit, ripe and red from the orchard"

    i agree with swishchick2412 she explained almost the same way as i did. Her theme was the same as mine too.

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  26. i like this poem bedcause it talks all about the nature and i enjoy nature and this poem is very moving...(;


    i agree with Ricky Mac

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  27. i liked this poem because it touched too the heart it reminds me of summer and fun and having a good time. Also the poem really describes the nature and how beautiful it is

    austin had the same idea as me because it also reminded him of summer and excitement therefore i agree with him, sadly

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  28. i like this poem bedcause it talks all about the nature and i enjoy nature and this poem is very moving...(;


    i agree with Ricky Mac

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  29. The theme of the poem is decribing nature and the beauties found with in it. The poet,Walt Whitman, uses the poetic theme of allieration. "GIVE me the splendid silent sun" Splendid silent sunlight is alliteration because it repeats the same consanant sounds.

    I agree with both Sammy Smith and Erin Baronas, because we each wrote the same things. They both wrote brilliantly about this poem.<33


    Stephanie Ternullo :]

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  30. This poem was very touching. It is based on the beauty of nature. It reminds me of spring and summer. I enjoyed this poem because of how detailed it was.

    This poem has a lot of imagery throughout it. Each part of the poem is vividly decribed so you can get an image in your mind.

    "Give me juicy autumnal fruit, ripe and red from the orchard;"

    The above is an example of one of the many imagery techniques throughout the poem.

    I agree with xxksheridan5xx. She makes very good points about the poem. A lot of the things she posted were exactly what I was thinking about the poem.

    ~Jenna
    ;)

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  31. In this poem the author wants a good, rural life unlike the city-dwelling life he has now. He wants to connect with the outdoors and enjoy the outdoors and open space and free, uncongested world."Give me solitude—give me Nature—give me again, O Nature, your primal sanities!" A similie is "Give me nights perfectly quiet, as on high plateaus west of the Mississippi, and I looking up at the stars;"......i love Devin Jamie Phillion!<333




    -Kyle LeClair

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  32. As I read the poem, I saw all of the things the poet, Walt Whitman, was asking for. For example, when he asked for the "...juicy autumnal fruit, ripe and red from the orchard", I imagined apples in an orchard. It is a very visual poem, and I really liked it. The end was very sad, because, in a nutshell, the poet was stating that he is bound to his city even though he longs for nature and that his longing is being crushed by his soul, which originally, longed for nature, but now, it is facing reality, stating that he can't go back to nature. He longs for it though. That was probably my favorite part of the enitre poem. It was just this crushing sadness that he knows he can't go to nature because he is bound to the city. He uses a lot of imagery, especially when he is describing what he wants like the "...juicy autumnal fruit..."


    I, personally, don't really agree with anyone who posted. I think that the theme of the poem is that nature is being taken away from us and that we are losing the ability to go back to nature.

    -Olivia Judson

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  33. I really like what the auhor is talking about in his poem. The poem tals about the nature that the auothor is surrouned.


    The person i agree with is Kyle LeClair beacues he gives very good points on what the author is saying in the peom.



    -Sarah Bullock

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  34. I enjoyed reading this poem alot because the author refers to good memories of nature and fun. He uses a simile by saying "Give me nights perfectly quiet, as on high plateaus west of the Mississippi..." which is comparing nights to the ones in Mississippi.

    Shawn Ray @(*-*)@

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  35. The theme of this poem is to respect and love nature. Not everyone can enjoy nature and it is dissapearing. The poem is an example of imagery. I could picture the whole poem as I read it. There is also an example of an alliteration. "...splendid silent sun."

    I agree with Stephanie and Olivia because I thought of both their ideas. I felt the poem was those two combined.
    -Kallan Roys :)

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  36. I liked this poem because the author want a good calm quiet life unlike the city. He also uses similes to show that he likes nature "Give me nights perfectly quiet, as on high plateaus west of the Mississippi..." that is one of the similes he uses. The theme of this poem is to enjoy nature how it is.


    -Danny Johnstone

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  37. This poem was most likely concentrating on the baeuty of nature during autumn. The poet talks about many things that he wants that he doesn't have during the summer.the author used personification when he said, "i see my soul trampling down what it asked for".


    I agree with Ricky, cause the author seems greedy.

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  38. This poem was most likely concentrating on the baeuty of nature during autumn. The poet talks about many things that he wants that he doesn't have during the summer.the author used personification when he said, "i see my soul trampling down what it asked for".


    I agree with Ricky, cause the author seems greedy.
    -DJ Smith

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  39. The poem is about the beauty of nature. The author lives in the city, however, he longs to be in nature. With all the wonderful landscapes and beings. This poem is a great example of imagery.
    "Give me juicy autumnal fruit, ripe and red from the orchard;"

    I agree with Kallan, because throughout the whole poem you really can picture what the poet is explaining. I also believe the poem is about respecting love and nature.

    -Maranda Johnston

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  40. this poem was centered on the beauty of nature during spring.The poet talks about the thing that he wants. the poem also showed positvie thought and ideas about what the wanted.

    I agree with Matt Febels Agreeing with jake becasue i was aslo emotionaly moved by this poem

    -Danny Johnstone

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  41. This poem is about the autumn comming and all of it's greatness. In the first few stanzas Whitman describes some of the good things in autumn using imagery such as, "juicy autumnal fruit, ripe and red from the orchard" and "a field where the unmow’d grass grows". Then past about stanza 10 whitman begins to describe how he loves all of these wonderful things that happen in nature during autumn and how his heart longs for them but yet he still stays in the city. He describes that he was, "enchain’d a certain time, refusing to give me up" by the city like he couldn't escape the city to be with nature. Then at the end of the poem he says that, "I see my own soul trampling down what it ask’d for." This states that he is destroying nature at the same time he is longing for it. Living in a city as he does is definitly not the way that he wishes to live but yet he will not leave it because he simply couldn't live whitout it.

    I agree with Olivia Judson on this poem because olivia and I have very similar views on what the poem is trying to say about whitmans relationship to nature and how he is actually destroying the thing he wanted the most.

    -Charlie Cedrone

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  42. The poem is saying that the thing you want the most will probably not be there anymore if you're too greedy. I believe this is what the poem is saying because in the poem it explains how Whitman loves all of the things in Autumn. But finally, his greed brings no satisfaction. Thus, the theme(messsage) of this poem is that if you are not satisfied with what you have then you will never be satisfied. One poeticnterm that's used in the poem is a simile. In paragraph 5, Lines 1-2, "Give me nights perfectly quiet, as on high plateaus west of the Mississippi, and I looking up at the stars;".

    I agree with Charlie Cedrone on this poem because Charlie and I have similar viewing of the poem. We both have established that Whitman likes nature a little too much and his gree takies over leading to his own destruction.

    -Shubhankar Joshi

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  43. this poem moved me

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  44. This poem was most likely concentrating on the baeuty of nature during autumn. The poet talks about many things that he wants that he doesn't have during the summer.the author used personification when he said, "i see my soul trampling down what it asked for".

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  45. IM THE EASTER BUNNY

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  46. I like this poem because he brings so many things into. he keeps saying give me over and over and over, naming things that he wants. Only things that he needs to live. Nothing more. A simile is "Give me nights perfectly quiet, as on high plateaus west of the Mississippi, and I looking up at the stars"

    i also aggree with CJ
    -Holly Lawson


    i am posting this agian becaus my google account was being weird, and gave me a weird name.

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  47. I liked this poem because it talks about all of the good things in life and nature. There was a use of personification in this poem. It was "Give me nights perfectly quiet" because nights can't be quiet because they can't talk.


    I agree with Sam Ferguson because we both view the poem the same way.


    -Nichole DeMarco Period 5

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  48. This is a really interesting poem because ti shows the good memories of the natural world. He uses a simile by saying "Give me nights perfectly quiet, as on high plateaus west of the Mississippi..." which is comparing perfection to the west plaeaus of Mississippi which is nice..

    I agree with shawn, because we have the same idea on the poem.

    John

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  49. The poet appears to be very greedy and wants many things in life. The simile is "Give me nights perfectly quiet, as on high plateaus west of the Mississippi, and I looking up at the stars;"

    I disagree with kyle because i dont think that the poet wants to be free in any way.

    -Sinead

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